I'd like to chat a bit about report writing and the little mistakes I see guys doing which penalize - or at least limits - their reports' K gathering potential. Hopefully this will aid you in perfecting your own reports - and definitely I'd also like to invite others' suggestions on better report writing.
First of course I'd like for you to look at the "template" and suggestions I made on report writing on the "suggestions/Guide for Newbies thread" post #25,
http://forum.sex141.com/eforum/v ... age%3D1&page=2.
Quite wordy and probably covers too much -but please note that I meant it only as checklist which the OP can use to remind himself if he wants to use a particular point or not etc.
Case #1
Then I'd like to further this discussion by pointing out what I FEEL is wrong with a particular report by referring to this:
$380 angry girl at fullservice sauna @ guomao subway/SHENZHEN
http://forum.sex141.com/eforum/v ... 3197&highlight=
And I truly hope the OP of that thread will not take offense as really, he does NOT deserve any particular criticism.
Anyway, what do you guys feel about this particular thread?
To me OP's put in a lot of work into it, tried to embellish it quite well, given OK detail, even tried to put in some humour - and yet it has NOT gathered as many K's as one would normally expect to see for such effort. In fact, I even see him actually getting docked a K point! OUCH!
And I can only conclude that his attempt at humour probably just fell flat/back-fired and instead labelled the OP as an uncaring and selfish monger bereft of any feelings for another human being. I mean, even I was gonna give him some K's, then backed off as I said to myself - Whaddya expect for your lousy RMB 380 ForCrissales? Mebbe if you had been a bit more gentlemanly, the whole thing would have turned around 180 degrees!"
Anyway - you guys see other "areas" where we all could do better with our own report writing?
Thanks
SEAJ
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Case #2
My own threads!!
Please look at these 2 recent threads of mine
1) School teacher turned to WG – what a waste!
http://forum.sex141.com/eforum/v ... 2854&highlight=
2) How truly loyal some Chinese girls can be – incredible! REAL PIXS
http://forum.sex141.com/eforum/v ... &extra=page%3D1
Both titled similarly, both out about the same time, both a bit of a sob-sob story, both with all sorts of details, both with LOTS of pictures which I add to periodically - the last ones being today, and both told similarly by the same guy - me!!
And yet, 1) has gathered a WHOLE lot more readership, karma points and replies running 5 pages whilst 2) barely can stay on the first page!!
And 2)'s even got lots more revealing and pictures of different gals etc - AND that I have even been trying to promote it here as the above post #2215 + more pictures.
Why's that??
The only thing different I can detect is that 1) is posted in the Mainland China section while 2) is posted in the Monger's section.
Strange!!!
Or am I missing something here/cain't see my own fatal mistake as I'm too close to it?
OK - guys, fire away!!
Tell it to me like it is ... with thanks beforehand!
SEAJ
Ps edit
Just to point out the stark difference in reaction to the 2 threads, some stats as of this writing:
1) 81 posts (25 mine) 121 karmas awarded ( Thanks guys! Appreciate it!)
2) 19 posts ( 7 mine) 33 Karmas awarded (Also THANKS bros! Appreciate it!)
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Last edited by SEAJ at 8-9-2011 00:13 ]