SEAJ
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15-7-2012 11:15 |
Reply #9 Petay_1283's post
"If I may....." LOL!
What..... you want my "King Shit-Stirrrer" mantle too?
Tried reading the whole thing - but it's just too much of a hate filled torrent of bile...without paragraphs...to sustain my interest. In fact. has ANYBODY else managed to go through the whole thing?
So..... to the OP ... I really do suggest that you do a bit of research/study into "story telling/writing" before anything else. That or else hire a professional writer to digest, re-organize and make sense of this jumble of blogs. And skip most of the bile filled anger - everybody already KNOWS you're pissed off, but nobody actually cares to be reminded every second paragraph! And if you REALLY want ANYBODY to read your story AND accomplish your stated desire for 1. Revenge 2. Serve to warn to others - then you need for your readers to ENJOY reading!!
And forget the technical details on computer hacking etc - this is the point where I stopped reading as I said to myself ....WTF??? A couple paragraphs would have been plenty to let us know that you got hacked and that you found out; end of that part of the story - no?
Reading all this is too much like going to a BBS filled with sub-par gals....you'd like to believe that amongst all this coal, there MUST be a diamond in the raw! But reading this pile of coal just seems too much trouble when one can just go to another BBS!
SEAN - What the hell do I know about writing - as much incomprehensible diatribe as I write myself??!!
Ps edit
Somebody ought to consolidate this thread with the other one on the very same subject
http://forum.sex141.com/eforum/v ... mp;extra=#pid437739
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